
It was thundering outside
And I was freezing inside.
But the thought of seeing you as my bride,
Kept me warm that whole night.
The romantic weather,
And that peacock's feather
Which you gave me,
Made me dance a-flutter!
I dreamt about you with open eyes,
While my window pane was struck by buzzing flies.
I cuddled the cushion in my hand,
And started staring at the fan.
I thought about the day we had first met,
In a classroom when your hair were wet.
I was open-mouthed when I saw you first,
I wanted to speak to you; my patience started to burst.
Tonight's weather was so like that day,
And on a chair I comfortably lay.
I decided to look into our past,
Then my heart started to throb fast!
You tried to unlock your hair,
And that entire process I stared.
Your face got imprinted on my mind,
I could see only you and for the world I was blind!
Your talks, your chuckle,
Indeed brought in my life some new miracles.
You were exactly like a princess of the fairy tales,
Who looked pretty everytime without a fail!
Then comes our first touch,
I can never forget the way you blushed.
And then our first kiss,
So amazing was that feeling of bliss!
I held your hand and took you in the open,
Where it had been raining strong.
What happened between us then had to happen,
Because it was only I whom you belonged!
We danced to the rhythm of the water striking the roof,
And reacted to the noise of the thunder!
We sat on the thatch after the hoof,
Our all energy had tendered!
We came close to each other,
The Cupid's arrow even made her sweeter.
We locked our affection to become one,
Even the weather's dignity was shunned!
That rain of my life was the most memorable one I had,
I won her and I'm so glad.
I wanted to dream about all this again,
Her simplicity and beauty made me mad!
Another thunder juddered me,
I alighted and reached the window.
I know even she's missing me,
Because our love is not hollow!
"Sometimes it takes,
Water to kindle a fire.
Our love is at its best,
Thanks to the nature's lyre."
And I was freezing inside.
But the thought of seeing you as my bride,
Kept me warm that whole night.
The romantic weather,
And that peacock's feather
Which you gave me,
Made me dance a-flutter!
I dreamt about you with open eyes,
While my window pane was struck by buzzing flies.
I cuddled the cushion in my hand,
And started staring at the fan.
I thought about the day we had first met,
In a classroom when your hair were wet.
I was open-mouthed when I saw you first,
I wanted to speak to you; my patience started to burst.
Tonight's weather was so like that day,
And on a chair I comfortably lay.
I decided to look into our past,
Then my heart started to throb fast!
You tried to unlock your hair,
And that entire process I stared.
Your face got imprinted on my mind,
I could see only you and for the world I was blind!
Your talks, your chuckle,
Indeed brought in my life some new miracles.
You were exactly like a princess of the fairy tales,
Who looked pretty everytime without a fail!
Then comes our first touch,
I can never forget the way you blushed.
And then our first kiss,
So amazing was that feeling of bliss!
I held your hand and took you in the open,
Where it had been raining strong.
What happened between us then had to happen,
Because it was only I whom you belonged!
We danced to the rhythm of the water striking the roof,
And reacted to the noise of the thunder!
We sat on the thatch after the hoof,
Our all energy had tendered!
We came close to each other,
The Cupid's arrow even made her sweeter.
We locked our affection to become one,
Even the weather's dignity was shunned!
That rain of my life was the most memorable one I had,
I won her and I'm so glad.
I wanted to dream about all this again,
Her simplicity and beauty made me mad!
Another thunder juddered me,
I alighted and reached the window.
I know even she's missing me,
Because our love is not hollow!
"Sometimes it takes,
Water to kindle a fire.
Our love is at its best,
Thanks to the nature's lyre."
I have just one word for this poem... Too NAUGHTY! hehe :P ... The poet has GROWN UP! :D
ReplyDeletehehehehe,, lolz!!! Thnks Aish! And you're right, I cannot show this poem to everyone, but okay, I'll keep it here on the blog.... :P
ReplyDeleteshobhit!!!..:X.....i feel this is another version of my poem!!....matlab hadd hain...its sooo similar to mine...especially da romance in rain..
ReplyDeleteit seems as if we have similar ideas of romance!!..ahem!!...mujhe toh aisa lag raha hian this is my poem...i feel so related...kya comment karu...meri 'the day it rained'..nd ur 'it rained tht day' shud surely go on a date sumday!!...hehe
And the poets of these 2 beautiful poems too should go someday... :)
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